This is the third review on 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope', the epic fantasy written by Les Bill Gates. This review was written by Joseph Kaval - Editor and publisher of the international literary journal Katha Kshetre.
Windows on Our World. Part I: Hope. By Les Bill Gates, pages 332, price $22.95, published by Lulu.com, ISBN 978-1-84753-515-3. www.lulu.com
Similar to the epics Mahabharata and Ramayana, the classics of Indian literature, Windows on Our World is a fantasy trilogy in the tradition of fantasy novels of recent era created by Les Bill Gates, the pen name of Leslie William Gates. Hope is the first part and the remaining parts, Faith and Love will eventually appear, so says the author. The story is told in twenty chapters. Squire, the legendary saviour and the expected one, arrives in Thorland. He helps the good wizard Tobin to find out the missing teeth of a golden skull that has magical powers to bring in peace and prosperity for the people of the land. Gordeve, the wicked wizard, sister of Tobin and the antagonist is also after the teeth. The fat and flesh of the book are the numerous adventures of Squire and his friends well equipped with suitable weapons of the time just as the characters of the American serial film 'A Team.’ After having encountered with evil forces the team redeems the teeth of upper jaw. The bone of the story is the eternal conflict between the good and the evil. The story ends happily and beautifully. But the readers may ask for: 'where are the teeth of lower jaw?' That is the magical effect of this volume and a pointer to author's craftsmanship. The book has all the elements of an interesting book such as an ideal theme, good story, beautiful sceneries, life-full characters, fantastic events, fighting and stunts, magical scenes, humorous dialogues, simple and common language studded with elegant phrases and idioms, route maps, happy ending etc. Careful and colourful crafting of those components makes the book wholesome and worthy of reading
While J.K.Rowling's Harry Potter series have unnatural and abnormal fantasies, Les Bill Gates has reined the imagination and has kept it within the boundaries of logic and reason. Les has made even an animal, mule the Faithful a lively character very unlike of JKR. The book is a pleasant reading for the readers - children, adults and the aged - having leisurely time at hand. While reading the saga of Squire and his company we are reminded of the films: 'Connan the Barbarian', 'Red Sonja', 'Ladies of Amazon', 'Death Stalker.' The book has the potential for being made unto film. We did not feel quite happy with the main title and the sub title. Title given to a book must be crisp, catchy of onlooker's eyes and compassing to the content of the book. Squire as a hero needed little more virility and vitality. The price of the book seemed little high - J.Kaval
Thank you, Mr. Kaval, for a great review.
Sunday, August 3, 2008
Thursday, July 31, 2008
“The clarity of unblemished prose”
This is the second review on 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope', the epic fantasy written by Les Bill Gates. This review was written by C. Noël Rivera, a professional reviewer on Allbook Reviews http://www.allbookreviews.com and Space Dragon Reviews http://www.spacedragonreviews.com/
Title: WINDOWS ON OUR WORLD, PART 1: HOPE
Author: Les Bill Gates
The ancient prophecy of Thorland is about to be fulfilled as a man known only as the Squire arrives by way of a giant eagle. Though the man does not remember who he is or where he comes from, he accepts the explanation of Helge, the woman who has been tasked with helping him on an important quest. With the help of the wizard Tobin, his apprentices, an archer, and three Luchorpans, Helge and Squire must locate the teeth that belong to the golden skull in order to reinstate its magical powers and protect Thorland from the evil Gordeve.
Numerous obstacles stand in their way, for Gordeve has begun breeding a terrible cougar, which carries malicious intentions toward Squire and his friends. She has spies in even the safest of places, and she holds a secret capable of corrupting even the most loyal of men. But even beyond Gordeve's schemes there are dangers, for someone is stalking Squire and his band, and their travels take them into remote, sometimes unfriendly, lands where the threat of war overshadows their quest.
Windows on Our World enters into the familiar fantasy realm of quests and wizards and curious creatures. No time is wasted in getting the heroes underway, and by the second chapter, Squire and Helge have already set out to find the rest of their party. In some cases, the action almost seems to move a little too quickly, putting expediency above the development of situational tension or character evolution. Very little is known about the characters themselves other than their present occupation, and their feelings are sometimes lost within the shared point of view structure.
The style of writing might be a little spare for some readers, but others will be pleased by the clarity of unembellished prose. There is no need to search for meaning within the words, as the author's intention is made clear through his choice of phrasing. This helps drive the story forward and, though we reach the ending with many questions, we know that the story will be continued in the next volume, where Squire's party will continue searching for the golden teeth.
Les Bill Gates is a teacher, and former principal, at King George VI National Secondary School in the Solomon Islands. He holds a mathematics degree from Oxford University and a Certificate in Education from Exeter University. He has traveled extensively and plans to pursue a career as an author, continuing the Windows on Our World series with the second book, Faith.
Reviewer: C. Noël Rivera, Allbook Reviews.
Thank you once again, Noël, for your great review.
Tuesday, July 29, 2008
Lord of the Rings meets National Treasure
Today, I am posting the first of the reviews written on my epic fantasy novel 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. This review was written by Yolande du Plessis, a student from South Africa.
In the first part of the fantasy trilogy, Windows on our World, Hope, is set in the fictitious Thorland. It is an easy read where Lord of the Rings meets National Treasure with vocabulary not above the average English reader.
Squire finds himself in Thorland after being summoned by the wizard Tobin to fulfil an ancient prophecy. Together with a company, selected by the prophecy, he set off in search for the teeth of the upper jaw which belong to the golden skull. The quest leads the company through beautiful descriptive scenes of the country by means of clues hidden with every tooth. But like all quests, there is a villain in the form of Gordeve, the evil wizard sister of Tobin, who does everything in her power to overthrow the company.
There is a strong universal theme of good and evil, camaraderie, and trust. At times the dialogue seems unnatural, but does not deflect attention from the story line. There is enough intrigue to keep you turning the pages.
The characters are interesting, although, except for Squire and Jippers, they do not have any body to them. Descriptions are done with precision, but they lack a certain humanity and you find it difficult to relate to them.
My final conclusion is that the first part of the trilogy, Windows on our World, is an entertaining read and I will recommend it to anyone who would like to sit back and relax for a few hours. I am waiting, with baited breath, the next book.
Yolande du Plessis
Thanks again, Yolande, for a very good and fair review.
Sunday, July 27, 2008
Return to Tobin’s Castle
This is the twentieth and final chapter of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. As you would expect, events combine and lead to a dramatic conclusion to the book. Yet, at the same time, this is the first book of a trilogy, so some things are left 'hanging in the air' and there are many unanswered questions.
The chapter centres around a dramatic battle in the depths of the caves of Boggart. As you read, you will be entranced by the graphic description of the underground caverns and how they are used in the battle. It's not giving too much away to say that the good guys win. However, how they do it and who are the heroes, are things you will only learn by reading the chapter.
Meanwhile, the members of the company have successfully found the last tooth and are on their way back to Tobin's Castle.
As the title of the chapter suggests, all our main characters meet again at the wizard's castle. There they learn some shocking news about Jippers and some good news about a forthcoming marriage. To find out more about these pieces of news, you will need to read the chapter.
The chapter and book ends with Tobin instructing the members of the company to go to their homes for a three month rest and charging them to return again to his castle after three months to begin the second quest. The second quest is described in the second book of the trilogy 'Windows on Our World, Part 2: Faith', which is now 90% completed.
However, you will not want to read the second book until you have read and savoured all the exciting events of the first book, 'Hope'. Read a chapter and reviews from 'Hope' by visiting http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html Go to http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to purchase the book.
Thursday, July 24, 2008
Sacumed
This is the 19th and penultimate chapter of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope', the epic fantasy trilogy by Les Bill Gates.
Who is Sacumed? He is a character who has appeared before in an earlier chapter, but we weren't told his name at the time. It will be a surprise to learn who Sacumed is and what his role is to be in the future of the story.
Sacumed is the one who brings news to Tobin about treachery and the stealing of something valuable to the company. Who is the traitor and what was stolen? How was the item recovered? And who is the other traitor who is exposed at Tobin's Castle? To answer these questions, you need to read this exciting chapter.
What are the Caves of Boggart and why are Sim and Squire approaching the caves? What happens when two wizards fight? All the answers are to be found in the chapter.
Read this chapter and be prepared for the thrilling ending to the book in the final chapter. Purchase your copy by visiting http://www.lulu.com/content/722089
Tuesday, July 22, 2008
Strange Beings
Chapter 18 of 'Hope', the first part of the epic fantasy 'Windows on Our World' by Les Bill Gates, opens with a description of the invasion of one of the Western states by Gordeve's navy and army. Which state is invaded, and what is the surprise outcome? Who was behind the plans that led to that outcome? Read the chapter and find out.
The remainder of the chapter, entitled 'Strange Beings', focuses on the company as they journey into the unfriendly and unpleasant marshlands at the delta of the Tee River. Who or what are the Ballybogs and who is the mysterious little old man known as Phynnodderee? How did he come to live among the Ballybogs? Will the Ballybogs and Phynnodderee prove to be friends or enemies? How will the members of the company manage to get past the bridge over the underground river that is guarded by the evil Water Woman? Where will they find the next tooth?
The biggest question of all comes in the last paragraph of the chapter. What has happened to Jippers' 'Hope'?
To answer these questions you will need to read this exciting chapter. You can find out more and purchase a copy of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' at http://www.lulu.com/content/722089
Sunday, July 20, 2008
Meetings at Southport
Southport is a town situated on the west side of the Moon River estuary and, as the title of Chapter 17 of 'Faith' suggests, there are to be some meetings at Southport. But to discover who meets whom and for what purpose, you will need to read the chapter.
The chapter begins with the five members of the company remaining on Gull Island seeking passage back to the mainland. Meanwhile, in the Central Kobold mountains, Gordeve is meeting with her spy and her generals. Two plans are hatched - one to steal a valuable possession from one member of the company and the other to launch an invasion of one of the countries of the alliance. What do they plan to steal, and which country will be invaded?
At the same time, Queen Sofee of Atmos sets off for West Thorland to lead a group to search Telemann's Wall for any secret openings or tunnels. Who is the handsome man who meets her at Southport and falls in love with her?
Who is the person who visits Sim late in the evening and what task will he be given?
The company have a problem in recovering the next tooth, but finally overcome the problem. Who or what are the mysterious Ballybogs and Phynnodderee mentioned in the next instructions? The company set off for the Tee River delta to find out.
The answers to all the questions above can be found in the chapter. Read the chapter and purchase the book at http://www.lulu.com/content/722089
Sunday, July 13, 2008
The Keeper of Secrets
In chapter 16 of 'Hope', we are introduced to one of the most unique characters in this or similar books - Percival, the Keeper of Secrets.
The chapter begins with more description of the Festival of Music and Dance and news of the Council at Fort Holt. Then the company moves on to their next location - Gull Island. At least, most of them do. Only Helge and Wim decide to travel with the mule, Faithful, from Jackville to Southport by land - a journey that will take them several kilometres inland as they round the estuary of the Moon River.
After a short sea crossing, the rest of the company walk to the highest point on Gull Island where they stay the night in a hut. Their efforts to find the next tooth prove unfruitful until Perkin makes a discovery. However, the surprising outcome of his discovery is only made clear when Percival, the Keeper of Secrets, arrives and explains all to him.
Percival also reveals a secret to Squire that he cannot quite understand. Also read about the latest attack from the enemy and find out what Percival has to say about Jippers and his secret.
What are the secrets that Percival shares with Perkin, Squire and Jippers, and how does he know these secrets? To find out the answers to these and many more questions, you need to read Chapter 16 of the first part of the trilogy 'Windows on Our World' by Les Bill Gates. Purchase the book at http://www.lulu.com/content/722089
Thursday, July 10, 2008
The Council at Fort Holt
‘The Council at Fort Holt' is the fifteenth chapter of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' by Les Bill Gates.
The leaders of the western nations of Luchor, Manchor, Atmos, West Thorland, the Telekai and Terrapo all attend, together with Professor Trumper and a Chairman. Who is the Chairman who delivers such a powerful speech, rallying the western nations to prepare for war? What are the war machines that the professor has invented? What will be the role of each nation in the preparation for war and during the action?
To answer these questions, you will need to read the chapter. To read the chapter, purchase this, the first book of the exciting fantasy trilogy, at http://www.lulu.com/content/722089
Meanwhile, the members of the company have moved on to the town of Jackville where they find the next tooth and attend the festival of Music and Dance - where the Luchorpans renew some old acquaintances.
Sim is at Tobin's castle when he receives an unexpected visitor and hears some startling news. Who is the visitor and how does the news impact on the future of the quest?
Thursday, July 3, 2008
Hanlin Monastery
Chapter 14 of 'Hope' begins with preparations being made for the Council at Fort Holt. King Jovanius sent his envoys to all the western leaders asking them to attend and Ben Lei, as host, set forth from Dunton to prepare things at the fort.
After leaving Tinlin, the company were attacked again. What kind of beasts attacked them this time and which one of the company was dragged away as a captive? How was he rescued and taken to Hanlin Monastery? You might be surprised to learn the answers to these questions.
At the monastery, the monk Brother Beghlin answers some of Squire's questions about the wizards, religion, the Creator and the Evil One, and about the One Prophet, Quexitoxeri.
The scene changes again with a repeat visit to Veil Falls. What happens when Perkin searches for the next tooth behind the falls?
Read 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' by Les Bill Gates. Your questions will be answered and you will be fascinated by the characters and world Les Bill has invented.
Tuesday, July 1, 2008
Tinlin
Tinlin is the name of a village that is the scene for the second half of Chapter 13 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope', the first part of the epic fantasy trilogy by Les Bill Gates.
However, the first half of the chapter is set in a cave in the Limestone Cliffs between Winterton and Jackville. There, the company have a very unpleasant experience and one of them comes close to death. Who is it, what is the unpleasant creature they meet, and what saves the injured person from a near-death experience? To find out, you will need to read the chapter.
Meanwhile, Yohan and the Telekai have stopped at Bunbury on their way back to Dunton. King Jovanius II has decided to call a council of all western leaders to be held at Fort Holt next month.
After retrieving the next tooth, the company move on to Tinlin, a small wine-producing village set in the eastern part of Hanlin Forest. What was Jippers doing there, and what happened when he tried to grab the shield?
To answer these questions, you will need to visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 and purchase the book.
Sunday, June 29, 2008
Reunion
The title of Chapter 12 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' is self-explanatory - the members of the company are re-united at Winterton.
However, there's a lot more happens in this chapter before the re-union takes place.
First, there's the meeting with the eccentric Professor Trumper. What is the strange contraption that he has invented that can transport him faster than a person walking? What happens when Vinny, Squire and Sim tried to ride the strange vehicle? When they reach the University city of Winterton, where do they find the next tooth?
Then there is the rotund Earl Philippo, ruler of Terrapo. Will he prove friendly and helpful to Helge and the others?
Meanwhile, who is Gordeve's chief spy who has come to report to her, and what plans does she have to try to disrupt the quest? Why is she so interested in Jippers?
To find the answers to these questions, you need to read Chapter 12 and must purchase a copy of 'Hope'. Go to http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html to find out more and read reviews, or visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to make a purchase.
However, there's a lot more happens in this chapter before the re-union takes place.
First, there's the meeting with the eccentric Professor Trumper. What is the strange contraption that he has invented that can transport him faster than a person walking? What happens when Vinny, Squire and Sim tried to ride the strange vehicle? When they reach the University city of Winterton, where do they find the next tooth?
Then there is the rotund Earl Philippo, ruler of Terrapo. Will he prove friendly and helpful to Helge and the others?
Meanwhile, who is Gordeve's chief spy who has come to report to her, and what plans does she have to try to disrupt the quest? Why is she so interested in Jippers?
To find the answers to these questions, you need to read Chapter 12 and must purchase a copy of 'Hope'. Go to http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html to find out more and read reviews, or visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to make a purchase.
Thursday, June 26, 2008
Heading for Winterton
'Heading for Winterton' is the title of Chapter 11 of 'Hope', book 1 of the epic fantasy trilogy 'Windows on Our World'.
The chapter begins with an exciting escape scene.
Winterton is a port and University city of West Thorland. On the way to Winterton, the members of the company are attacked and Squire uses his shield once again. The healing sap méli is used for the first time to tend to their wounds.
Far away, in East Thorland, Helge, Wim, Yohan and the Telekai escape to the island of Terrapo on board the schooner Bethia, captained by the dark-skinned Redbeard. When they reach the port of Pixar, Redbeard arranges for his neice, Seline, to escort them on the journey to the southern capital city of Hamil, ruled by the rotund Earl Philippo.
Of course, there are a lot more adventures packed into this exciting chapter. Read the chapter and the book by purchasing 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' at http://www.lulu.com/content/722089
The chapter begins with an exciting escape scene.
Winterton is a port and University city of West Thorland. On the way to Winterton, the members of the company are attacked and Squire uses his shield once again. The healing sap méli is used for the first time to tend to their wounds.
Far away, in East Thorland, Helge, Wim, Yohan and the Telekai escape to the island of Terrapo on board the schooner Bethia, captained by the dark-skinned Redbeard. When they reach the port of Pixar, Redbeard arranges for his neice, Seline, to escort them on the journey to the southern capital city of Hamil, ruled by the rotund Earl Philippo.
Of course, there are a lot more adventures packed into this exciting chapter. Read the chapter and the book by purchasing 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' at http://www.lulu.com/content/722089
Tuesday, June 24, 2008
The Ford and The Bridge
In chapter 10 of 'Hope', part 1 of the epic fantasy 'Windows on Our World' the focus is on two rivers.
The ford crossing of the Phooka River deep in enemy territory in East Thorland provides the scene for an ambush. But which side ambushed which and was the rescue attmpt on Alvin a success? Does the rescue party manage to escape and if so, how? There are some very surprising answers to these questions.
The suspension bridge over the Hom River deep in Homar's Forest is the backdrop for another exciting scene. Who follows the members of the company onto the bridge, and what is following him?
To find out the answers to these questions, you need to read Chapter 10 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. Visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to purchase the first part of this epic fantasy trilogy.
The ford crossing of the Phooka River deep in enemy territory in East Thorland provides the scene for an ambush. But which side ambushed which and was the rescue attmpt on Alvin a success? Does the rescue party manage to escape and if so, how? There are some very surprising answers to these questions.
The suspension bridge over the Hom River deep in Homar's Forest is the backdrop for another exciting scene. Who follows the members of the company onto the bridge, and what is following him?
To find out the answers to these questions, you need to read Chapter 10 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. Visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to purchase the first part of this epic fantasy trilogy.
Tuesday, June 17, 2008
Homar's Forest
This is chapter 9 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' by Les Bill Gates.
The chapter opens with an attack by cougars that causes Squire to use his shield once more. The twins, until now apprentice wizards, are initiated as wizards.
Helge learns the news that Alvin has been captured by the enemy. She sets off with Wim to seek help from Yohan and the Telekai to arrange a rescue mission.
The rest of the company travel to Homar's Forest in search of the next tooth. The forest has a reputation as a dark and forbidding place and Homar is reputed to be a fearsome Minotaur. Will Homar turn out to be a fierce animal or a friendly being?
And, what is Jippers trying to steal, and why?
To answer these questions, you will need to read 'Hope'. Visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to purchase the first part of this epic fantasy trilogy.
The chapter opens with an attack by cougars that causes Squire to use his shield once more. The twins, until now apprentice wizards, are initiated as wizards.
Helge learns the news that Alvin has been captured by the enemy. She sets off with Wim to seek help from Yohan and the Telekai to arrange a rescue mission.
The rest of the company travel to Homar's Forest in search of the next tooth. The forest has a reputation as a dark and forbidding place and Homar is reputed to be a fearsome Minotaur. Will Homar turn out to be a fierce animal or a friendly being?
And, what is Jippers trying to steal, and why?
To answer these questions, you will need to read 'Hope'. Visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to purchase the first part of this epic fantasy trilogy.
Sunday, June 15, 2008
Meliae and Nereids
In chapter 8 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1:Hope', entitled 'Meliae and Nereids', we meet for the first time creatures of Greek myhology.
The Meliae are hamadryads, descendants of the great mother Rhea. They are ethereal beings that dwell in the trees of Ash Wood. The Nereids are sea-nymphs, the daughters of Doris. They live in the ocean and are companions of the dolphins, just as the Meliae are companions of the trees.
At the end of chapter 7, Helge has learnt that the company must go into enemy territory, in East Thorland, to find the next tooth. The Meliae and Nereids assist some members of the company to gain access to East Thorland. The company then have to contrive some ingenious disguises in order to get the tooth.
One of the Meliae, Pitys, also plays an important part in the plot as the donor of the healing sap, meli, which features prominently in later chapters.
Want to buy 'Windows on our World, Part 1: Hope'? Visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to purchase
The Meliae are hamadryads, descendants of the great mother Rhea. They are ethereal beings that dwell in the trees of Ash Wood. The Nereids are sea-nymphs, the daughters of Doris. They live in the ocean and are companions of the dolphins, just as the Meliae are companions of the trees.
At the end of chapter 7, Helge has learnt that the company must go into enemy territory, in East Thorland, to find the next tooth. The Meliae and Nereids assist some members of the company to gain access to East Thorland. The company then have to contrive some ingenious disguises in order to get the tooth.
One of the Meliae, Pitys, also plays an important part in the plot as the donor of the healing sap, meli, which features prominently in later chapters.
Want to buy 'Windows on our World, Part 1: Hope'? Visit http://www.lulu.com/content/722089 to purchase
Thursday, June 12, 2008
Bo's Chasm
Chapter 7 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope' includes the first real battle action of the saga - the massacre at Dunton and the ambush which takes place in Bo's Chasm.
Bo's Chasm is a naturally occurring feature, a narrow former riverbed sandwiched between high cliffs. This was based on Stanley's Chasm in the Australian Outback. The chasm proves to be an excellent site for an ambush - but saying more would ruin the story.
Who or what is the mysterious person or animal following the company? Why is Helge so shocked when she reads the instructions for finding the next tooth?
Find out the answers to these questions and learn how the battle unfolds by reading the novel. Learn more at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Bo's Chasm is a naturally occurring feature, a narrow former riverbed sandwiched between high cliffs. This was based on Stanley's Chasm in the Australian Outback. The chasm proves to be an excellent site for an ambush - but saying more would ruin the story.
Who or what is the mysterious person or animal following the company? Why is Helge so shocked when she reads the instructions for finding the next tooth?
Find out the answers to these questions and learn how the battle unfolds by reading the novel. Learn more at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Tuesday, June 10, 2008
Bunbury
Bunbury is the capital city of West Thorland. It's also the title of Chapter 6 of the epic fantasy novel 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope.'
In this chapter, the company flee Ar, the ancient city where they had encountered a very distressing attack. As they travel south towards Bunbury they encounter an attack of a different kind and Squire uses the shield for the first time. When Squire uses the shield, he has a vision of our world and his alter ego, Grant Cowie. To learn more about these 'Windows on Our World', visit http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
At Bunbury, they meet for the first time another major character, Jippers, rat-catcher to the king. Jippers is looking for his 'Hope' and was to some extent modelled on Gollum in LTR; Gollum who was looking for his 'precious'. However, that's where the similarity ends. Jippers is a man and his search for his 'Hope' takes on a very different course from the one taken by Gollum in pursuit of the ring.
The chapter ends with the finding of the next tooth and instructions.
In this chapter, the company flee Ar, the ancient city where they had encountered a very distressing attack. As they travel south towards Bunbury they encounter an attack of a different kind and Squire uses the shield for the first time. When Squire uses the shield, he has a vision of our world and his alter ego, Grant Cowie. To learn more about these 'Windows on Our World', visit http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
At Bunbury, they meet for the first time another major character, Jippers, rat-catcher to the king. Jippers is looking for his 'Hope' and was to some extent modelled on Gollum in LTR; Gollum who was looking for his 'precious'. However, that's where the similarity ends. Jippers is a man and his search for his 'Hope' takes on a very different course from the one taken by Gollum in pursuit of the ring.
The chapter ends with the finding of the next tooth and instructions.
Sunday, June 8, 2008
The Northern Desert
In Chapter 5 of 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope', the company travels to the Northern Desert, first of all to Fort Holt at the southern extremity of the desert, where they meet another major character of the story, Yohan. Yohan, like Helge, comes from the island of Atmos and they are related, though they have never met before.
Yohan assists the company to travel across the desert in pursuit of the next tooth at the ruined desert city of Ar. To do so he solicits the help of Ben Wai, the paramount chief of the desert dwellers, the Telekai.
The city of Ar, once a thriving metropolis, is now in ruins as the desert has encroached further north. The description of the city is based on ancient ruined cities from the Greek and Roman eras.
The company experience many adventures as they cross the desert and the chapter ends with a real cliffhanger.
Want to know more? Go to http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html to find out details about how you can purchase this exciting epic adventure.
Yohan assists the company to travel across the desert in pursuit of the next tooth at the ruined desert city of Ar. To do so he solicits the help of Ben Wai, the paramount chief of the desert dwellers, the Telekai.
The city of Ar, once a thriving metropolis, is now in ruins as the desert has encroached further north. The description of the city is based on ancient ruined cities from the Greek and Roman eras.
The company experience many adventures as they cross the desert and the chapter ends with a real cliffhanger.
Want to know more? Go to http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html to find out details about how you can purchase this exciting epic adventure.
Thursday, June 5, 2008
The Island
In Chapter 4 of Part 1 of the epic fantasy 'Windows on Our World', the Luchorpans Alvin, Perkin and Vylin join the company, which is now complete. This fulfils the part of the prophecy: And by his hand - with the help of woman tall, twins, archer, three others and a mule -
Perkin, the holder of The Seeround Glass is to prove to be an important character in the trilogy. His magic glass can see around corners, even in the dark.
In this chapter the adventures really begin as the company travels to Peak Island where the cougars are waiting to attack them, and the three Luchorpans find the next tooth.
There are many more twists and turns to the narrative that you will only learn about if you read 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. Go to http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html to learn more.
Perkin, the holder of The Seeround Glass is to prove to be an important character in the trilogy. His magic glass can see around corners, even in the dark.
In this chapter the adventures really begin as the company travels to Peak Island where the cougars are waiting to attack them, and the three Luchorpans find the next tooth.
There are many more twists and turns to the narrative that you will only learn about if you read 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. Go to http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html to learn more.
Tuesday, June 3, 2008
Butterfly and Swan
Chapter 3 of 'Windows on Our World. Part 1: Hope' is entitled 'Butterfly and Swan'.
In this chapter, the company is almost complete as the wizard twins, Sim and Wim, join Helge, Squire and Vinny on the first leg of the 'Quest for the teeth of the upper jaw' that belong to the ancient golden skull. The wizard Tobin has the skull and it's the quest of the company to find all of the teeth. Whenever they find a tooth, they will also be given instructions to find the next tooth.
Tobin gives them the first set of instructions that take them to their first destination, the town of Rivermeet.
Their journey to Rivermeet is not without incident. When they arrive there, they meet the Luchorpan, Alvin. The chapter ends with the twins finding the first tooth.
It's the nature of the quest that motivates reviewer Yolande du Plessis to summarise the book with the words: 'Lord of the Rings meets National Treasure'. Read the review at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
In this chapter, the company is almost complete as the wizard twins, Sim and Wim, join Helge, Squire and Vinny on the first leg of the 'Quest for the teeth of the upper jaw' that belong to the ancient golden skull. The wizard Tobin has the skull and it's the quest of the company to find all of the teeth. Whenever they find a tooth, they will also be given instructions to find the next tooth.
Tobin gives them the first set of instructions that take them to their first destination, the town of Rivermeet.
Their journey to Rivermeet is not without incident. When they arrive there, they meet the Luchorpan, Alvin. The chapter ends with the twins finding the first tooth.
It's the nature of the quest that motivates reviewer Yolande du Plessis to summarise the book with the words: 'Lord of the Rings meets National Treasure'. Read the review at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Sunday, June 1, 2008
Journey to Tobin's Castle
This is the second chapter of the first book of my epic fantasy novel 'Windows on Our World.'
In this chapter we are introduced to another major character, the expert archer Vineon D'Ur, also known as Vinny.
Vinny assists in putting out the fire at the Cat and Fiddle Inn, then experiences a ‘spell of summoning’ as he meets the evil wizard, Gordeve. Gordeve gives him a message to pass on to her brother, the good wizard, Tobin.
Vinny, Squire and Helge set off for Tobin's castle. On the way they purchase the mule, Faithful. The chapter ends as they arrive at the wizard's castle.
To learn more, visit http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
In this chapter we are introduced to another major character, the expert archer Vineon D'Ur, also known as Vinny.
Vinny assists in putting out the fire at the Cat and Fiddle Inn, then experiences a ‘spell of summoning’ as he meets the evil wizard, Gordeve. Gordeve gives him a message to pass on to her brother, the good wizard, Tobin.
Vinny, Squire and Helge set off for Tobin's castle. On the way they purchase the mule, Faithful. The chapter ends as they arrive at the wizard's castle.
To learn more, visit http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Thursday, May 29, 2008
Arrival
For the next few days, I'm returning to the first book of my epic fantasy trilogy, 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. I'm going to discuss some aspects of each chapter of the book - without giving away too much about the plot.
The first chapter is called 'Arrival' and describes how Squire arrived in Thorland, summoned there by the Wizard Tobin, much as Thomas Covenant was summoned to The Land in Stephen Donaldson's 'Lord Foul's Bane'. However, that is where the similarity ends. Although, I'd like to be compared with Stephen Donaldson and achieve the success he has, his book and mine are very different.
Squire finds himself in a forest blanketed in snow and is pursued by wolves before falling off a cliff and being rescued by a giant eagle. He is taken to the home of the tall woman, Helge, who nurses him back to health. The chapter ends with Squire and Helge leaving her cottage and setting off on the quest to find the teeth that belong to the golden skull.
Of course there is much more in the first chapter. You can read the whole chapter by visiting http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
The first chapter is called 'Arrival' and describes how Squire arrived in Thorland, summoned there by the Wizard Tobin, much as Thomas Covenant was summoned to The Land in Stephen Donaldson's 'Lord Foul's Bane'. However, that is where the similarity ends. Although, I'd like to be compared with Stephen Donaldson and achieve the success he has, his book and mine are very different.
Squire finds himself in a forest blanketed in snow and is pursued by wolves before falling off a cliff and being rescued by a giant eagle. He is taken to the home of the tall woman, Helge, who nurses him back to health. The chapter ends with Squire and Helge leaving her cottage and setting off on the quest to find the teeth that belong to the golden skull.
Of course there is much more in the first chapter. You can read the whole chapter by visiting http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Tuesday, May 27, 2008
Is this the best site for writers?
Following on from my last entry, I'd like to say a bit more about Cheryl Wright's Writer2Writer http://www.writer2writer.com
I only came across this site recently and signed up for the BI-MONTHLY ezine a couple of weeks ago. When you sign up you get all sorts of free articles and software.
What I didn't know when I wrote my last blog post was how excellent the ezine is as well. This just arrived in my in box with an apology that it was late owing to illness. So this was the first one I had received.
I think I can say honestly this is the best writing newsletter that I have seen. This one had two excellent articles: 'Making an Effective Book Trailer' by Judy Bagshaw and Skyla Dawn Cameron and '4 Ways to Get Freelance Writing Jobs Part 1: Online Jobs' by Beth Morrow. It also has two free e-books to download, written by Jimmy D Brown. I haven't read them yet, but expect to get some useful tips from them.
Looking at the site again this morning, I've discovered that there are five free courses on offer: Writing for Profit: Break into Magazines, Outside the Square Fiction Workshop, Ebook Marketing Secrets Course, Short Story Writing Workshop and 5 Part Copywriting Course.
What more could you ask for free?
I thoroughly recommend this site and ezine to all writers.
I only came across this site recently and signed up for the BI-MONTHLY ezine a couple of weeks ago. When you sign up you get all sorts of free articles and software.
What I didn't know when I wrote my last blog post was how excellent the ezine is as well. This just arrived in my in box with an apology that it was late owing to illness. So this was the first one I had received.
I think I can say honestly this is the best writing newsletter that I have seen. This one had two excellent articles: 'Making an Effective Book Trailer' by Judy Bagshaw and Skyla Dawn Cameron and '4 Ways to Get Freelance Writing Jobs Part 1: Online Jobs' by Beth Morrow. It also has two free e-books to download, written by Jimmy D Brown. I haven't read them yet, but expect to get some useful tips from them.
Looking at the site again this morning, I've discovered that there are five free courses on offer: Writing for Profit: Break into Magazines, Outside the Square Fiction Workshop, Ebook Marketing Secrets Course, Short Story Writing Workshop and 5 Part Copywriting Course.
What more could you ask for free?
I thoroughly recommend this site and ezine to all writers.
Sunday, May 25, 2008
Go Aussie, go!
Today I'd like to say something about some of the excellent writer-related websites and e-zines I've come across.
From North America:
Writer Gazette, http://www.writergazette.com ,maintained by Krista Barrett has been voted 'Best Site' in Writer's Digest magazine for 2002, 2003, 2005, 2006 & 2007
Absolute Write, http://www.absolutewrite.com/, maintained by MacAllister Stone is full of useful information and links.
Writesparks, http://writesparks.com/, maintained by Shery Ma Belle Arrieta-Russ always has lots of helpful ideas.
Filbert Publishing, http://filbertpublishing.com and the e-zine Writing Etc, maintained by Beth Erickson has helpful ideas for freelance writers.
Moira Allen's Writing World, http://www.writing-world.com/, has a wealth of information about all aspects of writing.
There are many others. However, as a Brit living in New Zealand, what has struck me as surprising is the number of excellent sites and newsletters that come from 'across the ditch' in Australia.
These include:
Rob Parnell's The Easy Way to Write, http://easywaytowrite.com , full of helpful ideas and lots of free stuff, as well as a range of valuable courses.
Ruth Barringham's Writeaholics, http://www.writeaholics.net/ with lots of links, freebies and a publishing service.
Marg McAlister's Writing4Success, http://www.writing4success.com , which probably has the best weekly articles available anywhere (that I know of).
Angela Booth maintains an e-zine for freelancers 'Freelance Writing Success Tips and Skills' as well as several websites, including http://writinghacker.com/ Helpful advice for freelancers, and lots of courses also.
Cheryl Wright's http://www.writer2writer.com She has lots of helpful ideas and free gifts.
Considering the population of Australia, isn't it amazing that it has so many talented writers and freelancers?
From North America:
Writer Gazette, http://www.writergazette.com ,maintained by Krista Barrett has been voted 'Best Site' in Writer's Digest magazine for 2002, 2003, 2005, 2006 & 2007
Absolute Write, http://www.absolutewrite.com/, maintained by MacAllister Stone is full of useful information and links.
Writesparks, http://writesparks.com/, maintained by Shery Ma Belle Arrieta-Russ always has lots of helpful ideas.
Filbert Publishing, http://filbertpublishing.com and the e-zine Writing Etc, maintained by Beth Erickson has helpful ideas for freelance writers.
Moira Allen's Writing World, http://www.writing-world.com/, has a wealth of information about all aspects of writing.
There are many others. However, as a Brit living in New Zealand, what has struck me as surprising is the number of excellent sites and newsletters that come from 'across the ditch' in Australia.
These include:
Rob Parnell's The Easy Way to Write, http://easywaytowrite.com , full of helpful ideas and lots of free stuff, as well as a range of valuable courses.
Ruth Barringham's Writeaholics, http://www.writeaholics.net/ with lots of links, freebies and a publishing service.
Marg McAlister's Writing4Success, http://www.writing4success.com , which probably has the best weekly articles available anywhere (that I know of).
Angela Booth maintains an e-zine for freelancers 'Freelance Writing Success Tips and Skills' as well as several websites, including http://writinghacker.com/ Helpful advice for freelancers, and lots of courses also.
Cheryl Wright's http://www.writer2writer.com She has lots of helpful ideas and free gifts.
Considering the population of Australia, isn't it amazing that it has so many talented writers and freelancers?
Thursday, May 22, 2008
An exciting new website
For the last couple of weeks, I've been discussing my novel 'Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope'. http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Today, I'm going to tell you about my exciting new website:
Are you a POD or self-published novelist who is struggling to sell your novel?
Have you tried:
• promoting your book on your own website?
• ads?
• banners?
• link exchange?
• viral marketing?
• posting reviews of your book?
• press releases?
• other methods?
• all of these, but with little or no success?
Is your book for sale on amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com and other online bookstores?
Have you showcased your book on websites like http://www.bookhitch.com, http://www.nothingbinding.com or http://ebookscafe.writergazette.com ?
YET YOU ARE STILL STRUGGLING TO SELL YOUR BOOK.
This website is designed to help people like you.
Which authors are suitable for the new website?
It is for all* novelists, published with an ISBN. Though constructed with the POD or self-published novelist in mind, other novelists published by traditional publishers are also welcome to join.
* This excludes novels with erotic content.
Which authors are not suitable for the new website?
It is not suitable for novelists whose work has not yet been published. It is not a website where you can get your work critiqued, assessed, edited or proofread. If you are at these earlier stages, there are plenty of websites dedicated to helping you.
What about non-fiction?
At the moment, I am only considering non-fiction that tells a true story. Other types of non-fiction will not be accepted.
Short stories?
No short stories at this time, only novels of 50 000 words or more.
How does it work?
New members are asked to submit a sample chapter from their book to get chapter reviews from other members. At the same time, they will be asked to read and review the chapters of five other members in the queue ahead of them. Thus, each new member will give five chapter reviews and subsequently receive five chapter reviews.Authors will be given two weeks to complete his/her reviews. Any author who signs up but fails to complete the reviews on time (and without good reason) will be refused membership. If there is a good reason – illness, bereavement etc – the administrator must be informed; in which case, your allocated chapters will be passed to another member and you will subsequently be allocated new ones.
All authors accepted as members will have a profile on the website - see example. Membership of the site is free and visitors to the site will be able to view all parts.Your profile will include the following:
Details about your book and where to purchase it.
An image of your book cover.
A link to your sample chapter.
Your chapter reviews.
A book description or synopsis.
An author bio.
Links to book reviews.
See an example profile at
http://www.shareyournovel.com/profileauthorID0001.html
For more information, visit http://www.shareyournovel.com or join the Forum at http://www.shareyournovel.com/forum
Join, Share Your Novel, and make friends
Today, I'm going to tell you about my exciting new website:
Are you a POD or self-published novelist who is struggling to sell your novel?
Have you tried:
• promoting your book on your own website?
• ads?
• banners?
• link exchange?
• viral marketing?
• posting reviews of your book?
• press releases?
• other methods?
• all of these, but with little or no success?
Is your book for sale on amazon.com, barnesandnoble.com and other online bookstores?
Have you showcased your book on websites like http://www.bookhitch.com, http://www.nothingbinding.com or http://ebookscafe.writergazette.com ?
YET YOU ARE STILL STRUGGLING TO SELL YOUR BOOK.
This website is designed to help people like you.
Which authors are suitable for the new website?
It is for all* novelists, published with an ISBN. Though constructed with the POD or self-published novelist in mind, other novelists published by traditional publishers are also welcome to join.
* This excludes novels with erotic content.
Which authors are not suitable for the new website?
It is not suitable for novelists whose work has not yet been published. It is not a website where you can get your work critiqued, assessed, edited or proofread. If you are at these earlier stages, there are plenty of websites dedicated to helping you.
What about non-fiction?
At the moment, I am only considering non-fiction that tells a true story. Other types of non-fiction will not be accepted.
Short stories?
No short stories at this time, only novels of 50 000 words or more.
How does it work?
New members are asked to submit a sample chapter from their book to get chapter reviews from other members. At the same time, they will be asked to read and review the chapters of five other members in the queue ahead of them. Thus, each new member will give five chapter reviews and subsequently receive five chapter reviews.Authors will be given two weeks to complete his/her reviews. Any author who signs up but fails to complete the reviews on time (and without good reason) will be refused membership. If there is a good reason – illness, bereavement etc – the administrator must be informed; in which case, your allocated chapters will be passed to another member and you will subsequently be allocated new ones.
All authors accepted as members will have a profile on the website - see example. Membership of the site is free and visitors to the site will be able to view all parts.Your profile will include the following:
Details about your book and where to purchase it.
An image of your book cover.
A link to your sample chapter.
Your chapter reviews.
A book description or synopsis.
An author bio.
Links to book reviews.
See an example profile at
http://www.shareyournovel.com/profileauthorID0001.html
For more information, visit http://www.shareyournovel.com or join the Forum at http://www.shareyournovel.com/forum
Join, Share Your Novel, and make friends
Tuesday, May 20, 2008
An explanation of the dream?
The belief that Squire is living in a dream is reinforced by the mythical creatures that he meets throughout the quest - creatures that are drawn from the mythology of different cultures. Apart from the main characters, the Luchorpans, that are a variant of the Irish Leprechauns, he also meets the Minotaur Homar, from Greek mythology, Phynnodderee from the Isle of Man and the Ballybogs from Ireland (to name a few). In the second book 'Faith', he meets other creatures from Irish and Greek mythology, as well as one from the Himalayas. A logical explanation would be that Grant Cowie (Squire's alta ego from our world) has knowledge of various mythologies, and Squire dreams about them so that they become part of the 'reality' of his life in the Land.
However, the logical explanation is not always the right one. You will need to read to the end of the third book 'Love' before the whole plot is revealed.
However, the logical explanation is not always the right one. You will need to read to the end of the third book 'Love' before the whole plot is revealed.
Sunday, May 18, 2008
Windows to a dream, or reality?
What are the 'Windows on Our World' in the trilogy of the same name by Les Bill Gates?
A recurring theme of the story is that Squire (the hero) periodically returns to his own world as his alter ego Grant Cowie - these 'visions' of his own world are triggered whenever our hero uses the Shield Of Squire. He looks into the back of the shield and sees an image or 'Window' onto his own world. However, as soon as he sees this image, Squire loses consciousness and, when he awakens, he cannot remember what happened back in his own world. All he can remember is that the experience was not a pleasant one.
Underlying this experience is Squire's confusion about what is reality and what is a dream. Here is a paragraph from the first page of the first book:
'Is this the dream, and the other reality? As he lay motionless, he heard a whisper in his mind, “Squire, it’s me, Quexitoxeri. Soon the time will come for the fulfilment of the prophecy. The skull shall be made whole once more, and you will rule again in the Land.” Is this the reality, and the other the dream?'
Squire's thoughts show that he is not sure which is the dream and which is the reality.
As the plot develops, he learns that he bears a resemblance to The Squire, a great historic leader in Thorland, and he has been summoned to the Land to facilitate the fulfilment of a prophecy. How the fulfilment of that prophecy ends would be giving too much away.
Read the first chapter at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
A recurring theme of the story is that Squire (the hero) periodically returns to his own world as his alter ego Grant Cowie - these 'visions' of his own world are triggered whenever our hero uses the Shield Of Squire. He looks into the back of the shield and sees an image or 'Window' onto his own world. However, as soon as he sees this image, Squire loses consciousness and, when he awakens, he cannot remember what happened back in his own world. All he can remember is that the experience was not a pleasant one.
Underlying this experience is Squire's confusion about what is reality and what is a dream. Here is a paragraph from the first page of the first book:
'Is this the dream, and the other reality? As he lay motionless, he heard a whisper in his mind, “Squire, it’s me, Quexitoxeri. Soon the time will come for the fulfilment of the prophecy. The skull shall be made whole once more, and you will rule again in the Land.” Is this the reality, and the other the dream?'
Squire's thoughts show that he is not sure which is the dream and which is the reality.
As the plot develops, he learns that he bears a resemblance to The Squire, a great historic leader in Thorland, and he has been summoned to the Land to facilitate the fulfilment of a prophecy. How the fulfilment of that prophecy ends would be giving too much away.
Read the first chapter at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Thursday, May 15, 2008
Kobalos, and other words associated with Goblins
Just as the Orcs are the evil creatures characters in JRR Tolkien’s ‘The Lord of the Rings’, so the Kobalos are the evil creatures in ‘Windows on Our World’, the fantasy trilogy of Les Bill Gates.
The Kobalos are the evil creatures who have long supported the wicked wizards of the east and now make up the majority of Gordeve’s army. They are similar in height to the Luchorpans but much stockier in build. Their disproportionately large feet are unshod. They wear brown, studded leather jerkins and brown leather breeches that reach just below the knees, and a thin layer of grey hair covers most parts of their bodies. Each of them also carries a short, wide sword made from bronze.
What does Kobalos mean?
The English word Goblin is derived from the Greek ‘Kobalos’, which means ‘rogue’.
Alternative names for Kobalos, or their sub-races are: Kobolds, Brags, Trows (from Scotland), Spriggans (from England), Wichtlein (from Germany) and Phooka (from Ireland) – made famous in Shakespeare’s ‘A Midsummer Nights Dream’ as Puck.
I have used some of these words for place names in East Thorland – the part controlled by the wicked wizard Gordeve.
If you read ‘Windows on Our World’ by Les Bill Gates, you will not learn a lot about Kobalos and their place in mythology, but you will learn a lot about Les Bill’s interpretation of Kobalos as you get drawn in by the fascinating characters created by the author. If you would like to purchase ‘Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope’, or learn more, visit Les Bill’s website at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
The Kobalos are the evil creatures who have long supported the wicked wizards of the east and now make up the majority of Gordeve’s army. They are similar in height to the Luchorpans but much stockier in build. Their disproportionately large feet are unshod. They wear brown, studded leather jerkins and brown leather breeches that reach just below the knees, and a thin layer of grey hair covers most parts of their bodies. Each of them also carries a short, wide sword made from bronze.
What does Kobalos mean?
The English word Goblin is derived from the Greek ‘Kobalos’, which means ‘rogue’.
Alternative names for Kobalos, or their sub-races are: Kobolds, Brags, Trows (from Scotland), Spriggans (from England), Wichtlein (from Germany) and Phooka (from Ireland) – made famous in Shakespeare’s ‘A Midsummer Nights Dream’ as Puck.
I have used some of these words for place names in East Thorland – the part controlled by the wicked wizard Gordeve.
If you read ‘Windows on Our World’ by Les Bill Gates, you will not learn a lot about Kobalos and their place in mythology, but you will learn a lot about Les Bill’s interpretation of Kobalos as you get drawn in by the fascinating characters created by the author. If you would like to purchase ‘Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope’, or learn more, visit Les Bill’s website at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Tuesday, May 13, 2008
Cluricauns
Another variant of Leprechauns are Cluricauns. Cluricauns are close cousins of Leprechauns and look very similar, but have pink-tipped noses. They don’t wear aprons, but instead wear long blue stockings up to their calves, have gold laces on their caps and have silver buckles on their shoes. They are impeccably well-groomed and well-dressed.
Cluricauns never have any money and have no desire to work, but steal what they want. They like to enter rich men's homes, raiding their pantries and wine cellars, and draining their casks dry. To amuse themselves, they harness sheep and goats, shepherds' dogs or even pigs and revel drunkenly, racing them over the fields and over bogs after dark and throughout the night.
In the second book of ‘Windows on Our World’, we are introduced to the Cluricauns who live in part of Luchor in a small town called Cluritown. In contrast to the Cluricauns of legend, these Cluricauns like skithing (a variation of skiing) and are pulled along by the animal on a pair of planks that resemble skis. The main Cluricaun character is Millikane, a drunk, who kidnaps one of the company.
Cluricauns never have any money and have no desire to work, but steal what they want. They like to enter rich men's homes, raiding their pantries and wine cellars, and draining their casks dry. To amuse themselves, they harness sheep and goats, shepherds' dogs or even pigs and revel drunkenly, racing them over the fields and over bogs after dark and throughout the night.
In the second book of ‘Windows on Our World’, we are introduced to the Cluricauns who live in part of Luchor in a small town called Cluritown. In contrast to the Cluricauns of legend, these Cluricauns like skithing (a variation of skiing) and are pulled along by the animal on a pair of planks that resemble skis. The main Cluricaun character is Millikane, a drunk, who kidnaps one of the company.
Sunday, May 11, 2008
Luchorpans
Luchorpans, a variation on the Leprechauns of Irish Mythology
Just as the Hobbits are central characters in JRR Tolkien’s ‘The Lord of the Rings’, so are the Luchorpans central characters in my fantasy trilogy ‘Windows on Our World’.
So, what is a Luchorpan?
Luchorpan is just another word for Leprechaun.
However, the origins of the word Leprechaun are in dispute. Some scholars of Irish mythology believe the word is derived from the Gaelic ‘Luacharma'n’, which means ‘little body’ or ‘pygmy’. Others believe the word derives from ‘Leath bhrogan’ which means ‘maker of one shoe’ – Leprechauns always make one shoe at a time, never a pair.
Either explanation may be feasible, since Leprechauns are said to be only two to three feet tall and have the reputation of being cobblers.
I am in favour of the first explanation since other derivatives of Leprechaun are Luchorpan, Lubrican, Lubberkin and Lurikeen.
There may also be some connection with Lugh (whose name means ‘shining one’), the sun god of the ancient Celts, patron of arts and crafts and leader of the Tuatha dé Danaan (‘People of the goddess Danu’), a god of war, mastery, magic and good harvest and said by legend to be a master of many skills.
Whatever the origins, there is no doubting the importance of Leprechauns in Irish folklore.
Described variously as ‘fairies’, ‘sprites’ or ‘little elves’, Leprechauns are said to resemble little old men. However they are not dwarves since their various dimensions bear the same proportions to each other as those of humans. They are mischievous people who love to drink beer or poteen, smoke pipes, dance, and play music.
Leprechauns are hard-working people. Many of them are cobblers and renowned for the quality of the shoes they make. They are called ‘fairy cobblers’, for they make shoes for elves. Usually solitary, anti-social people, when not working, they often hide alone behind bushes or under trees smoking their pipes.
Leprechauns traditionally dress in garish old-fashioned clothes – trousers with braces, a checked shirt, an apron, a cocked hat and buckled shoes. Green is their favourite colour.
Their other main trade is banking, and Leprechauns have a reputation for thriftiness. One legend says that Leprechauns are self-appointed guardians of an ancient treasure of gold left in Ireland by the marauding Danes in the ninth century and that they hide their gold in buried pots. This is one reason why they avoid humans whom they regard as greedy creatures.
Leprechauns carry two leather pouches. One contains a magic silver coin that always returns to the pouch once it is paid out. The other contains a gold coin used to bribe his way out of trouble. This coin, it is alleged, will turn into a rock or a leaf once it is given away.
If you capture a Leprechaun, he should grant you three wishes. However, you shouldn't let him out of your grasp or your sight for a second. He'll try to distract you or use any trick he can think of to get away. If your eyes leave the Leprechaun for even one second he will vanish in the blink of an eye.
The Luchorpans of ‘Windows on Our World’ are based on Leprechauns, but there are some differences. For one thing, there are female Luchorpans such as Vylin Shoemaker, one of the main characters, and Kaitlyn Fortkeeper, commander of the Guards of Luchor. There isn't, however, any mention of female Leprechauns in traditional Irish legend.
The Luchorpans of ‘Windows on Our World’ live in a mythical country called Luchor (to the west of the Air Mountains), with a small enclave also living in the town of Rivermeet in West Thorland (to the east of the Air Mountains).
The other main Luchorpan characters are Perkin Goldmaster, Alvin Shoemaker, Sawkin Goldmaster and High Lord Trevin. Perkin is a banker who possesses the Seeround Glass – a magic glass that can see around corners. He and Vylin are engaged. Alvin, Vylin’s sister, features throughout Book 1, ‘Hope’, but is replaced early in the second book ‘Faith’ by Sawkin, a distant relative of Perkin.
If you read my trilogy ‘Windows on Our World’, you will not learn a lot about Leprechauns and their place in Irish mythology, but you will learn a lot about Luchorpans as you get drawn in by the fascinating characters I have created. If you would like to purchase ‘Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope’, or learn more, visit my website at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Just as the Hobbits are central characters in JRR Tolkien’s ‘The Lord of the Rings’, so are the Luchorpans central characters in my fantasy trilogy ‘Windows on Our World’.
So, what is a Luchorpan?
Luchorpan is just another word for Leprechaun.
However, the origins of the word Leprechaun are in dispute. Some scholars of Irish mythology believe the word is derived from the Gaelic ‘Luacharma'n’, which means ‘little body’ or ‘pygmy’. Others believe the word derives from ‘Leath bhrogan’ which means ‘maker of one shoe’ – Leprechauns always make one shoe at a time, never a pair.
Either explanation may be feasible, since Leprechauns are said to be only two to three feet tall and have the reputation of being cobblers.
I am in favour of the first explanation since other derivatives of Leprechaun are Luchorpan, Lubrican, Lubberkin and Lurikeen.
There may also be some connection with Lugh (whose name means ‘shining one’), the sun god of the ancient Celts, patron of arts and crafts and leader of the Tuatha dé Danaan (‘People of the goddess Danu’), a god of war, mastery, magic and good harvest and said by legend to be a master of many skills.
Whatever the origins, there is no doubting the importance of Leprechauns in Irish folklore.
Described variously as ‘fairies’, ‘sprites’ or ‘little elves’, Leprechauns are said to resemble little old men. However they are not dwarves since their various dimensions bear the same proportions to each other as those of humans. They are mischievous people who love to drink beer or poteen, smoke pipes, dance, and play music.
Leprechauns are hard-working people. Many of them are cobblers and renowned for the quality of the shoes they make. They are called ‘fairy cobblers’, for they make shoes for elves. Usually solitary, anti-social people, when not working, they often hide alone behind bushes or under trees smoking their pipes.
Leprechauns traditionally dress in garish old-fashioned clothes – trousers with braces, a checked shirt, an apron, a cocked hat and buckled shoes. Green is their favourite colour.
Their other main trade is banking, and Leprechauns have a reputation for thriftiness. One legend says that Leprechauns are self-appointed guardians of an ancient treasure of gold left in Ireland by the marauding Danes in the ninth century and that they hide their gold in buried pots. This is one reason why they avoid humans whom they regard as greedy creatures.
Leprechauns carry two leather pouches. One contains a magic silver coin that always returns to the pouch once it is paid out. The other contains a gold coin used to bribe his way out of trouble. This coin, it is alleged, will turn into a rock or a leaf once it is given away.
If you capture a Leprechaun, he should grant you three wishes. However, you shouldn't let him out of your grasp or your sight for a second. He'll try to distract you or use any trick he can think of to get away. If your eyes leave the Leprechaun for even one second he will vanish in the blink of an eye.
The Luchorpans of ‘Windows on Our World’ are based on Leprechauns, but there are some differences. For one thing, there are female Luchorpans such as Vylin Shoemaker, one of the main characters, and Kaitlyn Fortkeeper, commander of the Guards of Luchor. There isn't, however, any mention of female Leprechauns in traditional Irish legend.
The Luchorpans of ‘Windows on Our World’ live in a mythical country called Luchor (to the west of the Air Mountains), with a small enclave also living in the town of Rivermeet in West Thorland (to the east of the Air Mountains).
The other main Luchorpan characters are Perkin Goldmaster, Alvin Shoemaker, Sawkin Goldmaster and High Lord Trevin. Perkin is a banker who possesses the Seeround Glass – a magic glass that can see around corners. He and Vylin are engaged. Alvin, Vylin’s sister, features throughout Book 1, ‘Hope’, but is replaced early in the second book ‘Faith’ by Sawkin, a distant relative of Perkin.
If you read my trilogy ‘Windows on Our World’, you will not learn a lot about Leprechauns and their place in Irish mythology, but you will learn a lot about Luchorpans as you get drawn in by the fascinating characters I have created. If you would like to purchase ‘Windows on Our World, Part 1: Hope’, or learn more, visit my website at http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
Thursday, May 8, 2008
'Hope', Faith' and 'Love'
How did I decide on the subtitles for the three parts of the epic fantasy trilogy 'Windows on Our World'?
These were not decided upon until I had written several chapters of the first book. The idea came after I introduced the character Jippers. Jippers is the only character apart from the hero, Squire, who comes from our world. I wanted a character who was seeking something, much like Gollum is seeking his 'precious'. Jippers is continually looking for his 'Hope', which is a hope that he can find a way back to his own world. Read 'Windows on Our World, Part 1, Hope' to see whether or not Jippers achieves his hope. http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
So, I settled on 'Hope' as the subtitle for the first book - and for a trilogy, what could be more obvious than to call the other two books 'Faith' and 'Love'?
It would be giving too much away at the moment to explain how 'Faith' plays a part in the second book.
These were not decided upon until I had written several chapters of the first book. The idea came after I introduced the character Jippers. Jippers is the only character apart from the hero, Squire, who comes from our world. I wanted a character who was seeking something, much like Gollum is seeking his 'precious'. Jippers is continually looking for his 'Hope', which is a hope that he can find a way back to his own world. Read 'Windows on Our World, Part 1, Hope' to see whether or not Jippers achieves his hope. http://www.lesbillgates.com/hope.html
So, I settled on 'Hope' as the subtitle for the first book - and for a trilogy, what could be more obvious than to call the other two books 'Faith' and 'Love'?
It would be giving too much away at the moment to explain how 'Faith' plays a part in the second book.
Tuesday, May 6, 2008
Windows on Our World
What was the motivation behind my fantasy novel trilogy 'Windows on Our World'?
The inspiration for the trilogy came from other fantasy novels, in particular 'Lord of the Rings' by JRR Tolkien and 'The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant the Unbeliever' by Stephen Donaldson.
From Tolkien, I have adopted the idea of a quest, but then so have others such as Terry Brooks and David Eddings, to name just two.
From Donaldson, I have adopted the idea of a man (in his case Covenant, in my case Squire) being summoned from his own world to another fantasy world.
But that's where the similarities end. I have tried not to emulate these great novelists, but have a story that is original and my own work.
A third idea for the plot came from a book I read as a child - I can't recall its title or author - where the heroes of the story follow a paper chain of clues to get the prize. In my case, the members of the company must follow a set of instructions to find the teeth that belong to the golden skull.
What about the title?
With the 'Thomas Covenant' part of the idea, I wanted a title that reflected the fact that Squire would have visions of his own world - hence 'Windows on Our World'. However, I also thought to make some profit from the association of 'Gates' and 'Windows'. If anything, this have probably proved counterproductive. Do a google on 'Windows' and you'll get 1.33 billion results! Do a search on 'Windows on Our World', you'll still get more than 9 million results. However, mine comes in at number 3.
What about the subtitles: 'Hope', Faith' and 'Love'? - I'll deal with this next time.
http://www.lesbillgates.com
The inspiration for the trilogy came from other fantasy novels, in particular 'Lord of the Rings' by JRR Tolkien and 'The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant the Unbeliever' by Stephen Donaldson.
From Tolkien, I have adopted the idea of a quest, but then so have others such as Terry Brooks and David Eddings, to name just two.
From Donaldson, I have adopted the idea of a man (in his case Covenant, in my case Squire) being summoned from his own world to another fantasy world.
But that's where the similarities end. I have tried not to emulate these great novelists, but have a story that is original and my own work.
A third idea for the plot came from a book I read as a child - I can't recall its title or author - where the heroes of the story follow a paper chain of clues to get the prize. In my case, the members of the company must follow a set of instructions to find the teeth that belong to the golden skull.
What about the title?
With the 'Thomas Covenant' part of the idea, I wanted a title that reflected the fact that Squire would have visions of his own world - hence 'Windows on Our World'. However, I also thought to make some profit from the association of 'Gates' and 'Windows'. If anything, this have probably proved counterproductive. Do a google on 'Windows' and you'll get 1.33 billion results! Do a search on 'Windows on Our World', you'll still get more than 9 million results. However, mine comes in at number 3.
What about the subtitles: 'Hope', Faith' and 'Love'? - I'll deal with this next time.
http://www.lesbillgates.com
Sunday, May 4, 2008
What's in a name?
This is my first post. I'll say more about some things I've been doing in the days ahead.
I've been told that I must have a blog if I want to promote myself, my book, my services and my websites, so here goes...
I'm also posting to my own site at http://www.lesbillgates.com/blog.html and Live Journal at http://lesbillgates.livejournal.com
One reviewer of my site http://www.lesbillgates.com on Link Referral said 'Use of Bill Gates in the site is not appropriate'.
I replied by saying that since this is my own name, it is appropriate. I am Leslie William Gates. Leslie was given to me by my father - it was the name of his best friend who was killed in WW2. But who wants to be called 'Leslie'? I have always been known as 'Les'. My second name is William, named after my paternal grandfather and greatgrandfather. Like the more famous William Gates, I abbreviate 'William' to 'Bill'. So, that's my name.
Was it inappropriate for Matin Luther King to use the name of the founder of the Lutheran Church?
Is it inappropriate for the former Prime Minister of New Zealand, Mike Moore, to have the same name as the documentary filmaker of "Bowling for Columbine'?
Is it inappropriate for the writer of the movie 'Gremlins' to call himself Chris Columbus after the discoverer of America?
Is it inappropriate that the New Zealand batsman Bert Sutcliffe used almost the same name as the great English batsman Herbert Sutcliffe?
What about Peter Jackson. Did he take his name from a cigarette brand?
OF COURSE NOT!
Neither is it inappropriate for me to use the name Les Bill Gates. I do have six years and an Oxford degree in my favour on my more illustrious namesake, but he has a megabusiness and a few million dollars in his favour. Maybe he is even my distant cousin. I am proud to be associated with the founder of Microsoft.
I've been told that I must have a blog if I want to promote myself, my book, my services and my websites, so here goes...
I'm also posting to my own site at http://www.lesbillgates.com/blog.html and Live Journal at http://lesbillgates.livejournal.com
One reviewer of my site http://www.lesbillgates.com on Link Referral said 'Use of Bill Gates in the site is not appropriate'.
I replied by saying that since this is my own name, it is appropriate. I am Leslie William Gates. Leslie was given to me by my father - it was the name of his best friend who was killed in WW2. But who wants to be called 'Leslie'? I have always been known as 'Les'. My second name is William, named after my paternal grandfather and greatgrandfather. Like the more famous William Gates, I abbreviate 'William' to 'Bill'. So, that's my name.
Was it inappropriate for Matin Luther King to use the name of the founder of the Lutheran Church?
Is it inappropriate for the former Prime Minister of New Zealand, Mike Moore, to have the same name as the documentary filmaker of "Bowling for Columbine'?
Is it inappropriate for the writer of the movie 'Gremlins' to call himself Chris Columbus after the discoverer of America?
Is it inappropriate that the New Zealand batsman Bert Sutcliffe used almost the same name as the great English batsman Herbert Sutcliffe?
What about Peter Jackson. Did he take his name from a cigarette brand?
OF COURSE NOT!
Neither is it inappropriate for me to use the name Les Bill Gates. I do have six years and an Oxford degree in my favour on my more illustrious namesake, but he has a megabusiness and a few million dollars in his favour. Maybe he is even my distant cousin. I am proud to be associated with the founder of Microsoft.
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